On Monday 3rd May the Minstrel came to Riverdale School. He taught us all about fishing. In class we wrote a story on a fishing experience. We are learning to be interesting writers by using lots of adjectives and details. We have learnt to get straight into the action.
I think my story is good because of my speech.
To improve my writing next time I will add adjectives.
I love the way you got straight into the action Campbell. This is a great story.
ReplyDeleteFrom Mrs Tamatea