This is my visual language sample for term 2. I have selected this sample because the picture matched the poem. My next learning step is to have correct spacing.
Wednesday, July 21, 2010
Wednesday, May 26, 2010
Fishing story
On Monday 3rd May the Minstrel came to Riverdale School. He taught us all about fishing. In class we wrote a story on a fishing experience. We are learning to be interesting writers by using lots of adjectives and details. We have learnt to get straight into the action.
I think my story is good because of my speech.
To improve my writing next time I will add adjectives.
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